'Come on down, okay?' Redone

So for those of you who've been watching this account for a long while (who are left), you probably remember this piece from years back that accompanied Chapter 1 of In The Rain: [link]

Well, after three years of practice and improvement, combined with positive reinforcement from people who have enjoyed what I've written so far, I decided to tackle it again and see what kind of difference three years has made.

Needless to say, I think it made a hell of a lot of difference.

Now where's that "Draw This Again!" meme when you need it..?